This is what I've been working on lately.
I broke down each chapter into its component scenes, figured the date/time, whose POV is the scene in, a one line description of the scene, and the page number.
I think I'm making good progress - especially in cutting the parts that take away from the main story and making what I've got more exciting and focused.
Wish me luck!
Thursday, June 24, 2010
Wednesday, June 23, 2010
Repost:: Examples of the Waif
The prototype of The Waif is, of course, Cinderella. Some say Sleeping Beauty was a Waif, but I always felt her passivity was born out of her family keeping her ignorant of her danger instead of teaching her how to save herself.
Other famous Waifs are:
Ilsa Laszlo in Casablanca
Dorothy Gale in The Wizard of Oz
Juliet in Romeo and Juliet
Amanda in The Glass Menagerie
Bella fits right in.
Other famous Waifs are:
Ilsa Laszlo in Casablanca
Dorothy Gale in The Wizard of Oz
Juliet in Romeo and Juliet
Amanda in The Glass Menagerie
Bella fits right in.
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