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Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Down the rabbit hole


Ever since I posted my weapons dealer thoughts, I've been obsessed with the concept of a woman who deals arms. I haven't done any research into the world, I haven't looked at anything, but I keep going over and over what would drive a woman to an extreme career.

I followed my strange brain into this new character. While I was eating breakfast today, I jotted down her Goal, Motivation, and Conflict (previously here). I don't know what she would look like, what her name may be, or anything else. I was just playing with what kind of toll this would take on someone.

Character: Female Arms Dealer

Goal: Death.
Now, goals are supposed to be concrete, instead of vague. I mean, really - death? That's guaranteed for everybody. So I thought about it and decided she would want to destroy Warlord X. I think she'd start off wanting to kill him, but her character arc could be that she'd rather take away what he most loved (power? His drug fields? His alligator farm? Who knows yet?)



Motivation: Revenge
At first I thought she would want to avenge the deaths of her parents/family (shades of Melina Havelock from For Your Eyes Only). It's a pretty good idea, but I didn't want to get too trite. Perhaps Warlord X destroyed the school or hospital she worked at and she had to use a handgun to escape the devastation. Or someone she loved was ruined beyond healing by his actions.


Conflict: Stymied by agents of the law
This felt a bit weak to me at first, but it certainly introduces the hero! A hot, serious anti-terrorist guy? An agent from Alcohol, Tobacco, and Firearms? Her pissed off ex-boyfriend?

Sounds like a cool story, doesn't it?

4 comments:

  1. Sounds AWESOME!

    Can't wait to see how you work in the alligator farm....heh...

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  2. Hey there, Awesome Miss B -

    My bizarre sense of whimsy wants to create a warlord whose secret fantasy is to make animated cartoons.

    With alligators. :)

    I don't think it would work, but what a twist, eh???

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  3. I like the hospital motivation but would change it to "if only she had a handgun she could have saved the day" but she wasn't on that journey yet...
    Except that wouldn't work because becoming an arms dealer would mean she was supplying the enemy. Unless that was her motivation, to learn the enemy through basic retail sales... I love plot storming!

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  4. @Therese- I'm getting a "weapons of my enemy" vibe off of this woman. Not sure where this will take me!

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