I write tight. I don't want to bore anyone, ya know. But there's fast paced and then there's, "What's going on here, again?"
So I have to add to my manuscripts, opposed to most of my friends, who write long and then cut.
My goal is to let go of my fear of boring people and write as floridly and passionately as I can. Or at least put in a few Zombie Frogs.