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Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Examples

Here's a quick example of how the nine sentence synopsis works.


  1. The trouble starts when.....  Linda wants ice cream.
  2. The protagonist makes a plan to cope by... going to the freezer.
  3. The trouble gets worse when...there is no ice cream there!
  4. The protagonist regroups and presses on harder by...checking her purse for money
  5. The protagonist reaches the point of no return when...she gets in her car to go to the store.
  6. The protagonist is pushed to the brink when...all the lights are red on the way to the store.
  7. She appears to have lost when...there is no Coconut Bliss!
  8. She fights on by...looking behind all the other ice cream containers.
  9. Everything is on the line and only one will win when...she stands up on tiptoe, drags the last container out by the tips of her fingers, and barely avoids pulling over the display!
Even this little silly story about ice cream has rising and falling action. It also describes my GMC and how it changes. For example:

Goal: Get ice cream (what I want)
Motivation: Hungry (because)
Conflict: None in the freezer (but)

My goal and motivation remain the same, but the conflict changes as the story goes on. In a more complicated story, the protagonist examines if her goal is worth what she thought it was. In a tragedy, the story would go like this:
  1. The trouble starts when.....Linda wants ice cream
  2. The protagonist makes a plan to cope by...going to the freezer
  3. The trouble gets worse when...there is no ice cream !
  4. The protagonist regroups and presses on harder by...looking her purse for change
  5. The protagonist reaches the point of no return when...she is out of money!
  6. The protagonist is pushed to the brink when...she ransacks the sofa cushions for change
  7. She appears to have lost when...there is nothing there either.
  8. She fights on by...checking her bank account
  9. Everything is on the line and only one will win when...she can't afford the ice cream.
This little tool tells you how you want to run your story, and what needs to happen between each section. The writer can add the setting by talking about how blisteringly hot it is out, by what her house looks like, what kind of ice cream is haunting her.



    2 comments:

    1. Great plot snapshot! It's going into my plot section of my writing workbook. :D

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    2. Hooray! :) It really does make things a lot of fun.

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